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Wednesday, June 15, 2016

People who have changed the world

This week in Kauri we have been investigating on famous

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  1. This is a great introduction to Abraham Lincoln. I was sad to read that he could not make a sound from any musical instrument. I would love to know what you admire about Abraham Lincoln. It is great to see that he is still remembered today. I look forward to your next blog post.

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  2. Hi Saxon this is awesome because you're wrote what he did in his life. I like that you wrote the time line in order of what he did in his life time. But maybe change the colour of the font for his school report because it is a bit hard to read.

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  3. Hi Saxon this is awesome because you're wrote what he did in his life. I like that you wrote the time line in order of what he did in his life time. But maybe change the colour of the font for his school report because it is a bit hard to read.

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