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Safety First

Safety first

Hello and welcome to S.E.I News and today we are talking about a man that had an attempt to

climb a very tall building here's Eze telling us what happened. Thank You for that Saxon, the man climbed up to the big clock and the clock broke and his friend gave him a rope but the cop chased his friend and nothing was holding him, he hold the rope and fell but at the last second his friend outran the cop and grabbed the rope. He climbed up the roof and got up the top of the building but when he got up he got smashed by a wind measure and he on the side of the roof and was going to fall but a rope got hang of his foot. He sung like spider and sung back to where he was at first and his wife got hold of him.

.He did not have any safety stuff with, him and since  there were no laws about safety in those days he just did It without caring If that was me It would be very scared.

Here is the link if you want to watch it Safety Last.     

The Cockroach Robbery

THE BIGGEST COCKROACH  ROBBERY

An old georgian woman whose flat was infested with more than 75,000 cockroaches has won free insecticide and a cash prize and a  2 month free trip to fiji  after her problem was judged by president obama of united states   one of the worst in the world. “While I cook, roaches fall from the ceiling fan into my food,” Mary Esposito said when she was interviewed by the world wide news and she decided that she would sell cockroaches after she back from fiji  of course and she made a fortune. And she used that money to purchase a shop to sell more cockroaches. And  the next day she went to the store to sell more and the  cockroaches were gone and so she went to the police and they said Cockroach robberies have been found lately  and we found out that the culprits names the cockroach wizard and he he wants to catch the Cockroaches so that he can invade  the world. So they put up  wanted posters in every nook and cranny of the city.Now go back to your shop and put a closed sign on the door and say ran it in right on it ran out of cockroaches we will stock up tomorrow. Later that night she went to the store and the cockroaches were back and she called The police and they said we caught the cockroach wizard now everyone's safe

People who have changed the world

This week in Kauri we have been investigating on famous

camp letter

If your parent went on camp, please write a letter to another person and give your own parent a big hug next time you see them.

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14 / 3 / 2016

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Kauri / Rimu

Yaldhurst Model School

Christchurch Dear rusty carrot

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(Paragraph 1): In this paragraph you introduce yourself and thank the person for being at camp (at least 30 words).We Are Learning To:

Use paragraphs for each new idea

Use interesting words

Edit our writing wit

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Key words: enjoyed, fantastic, awesome, challenging, tiring, delicious, scrumptious, crazy, parents, Hammer Springs, Forest Camp

>Hi my name is Saxon. I am from Yaldhurst School , thank you for the food. The food was delicious, thank you again Rusty Carrot for lunch and tea. Good luck for the other schools that you give food to.

(Paragraph 2): In this paragraph you tell your person what you enjoyed about camp and what you remember most about the person that you are writing to (at least 60 words).

Key words: hydro slide, tree climbing, waterfall track, mountain, mission impossible, orienteering, grass, Conical Hill, paint game, lazy river, Rusty Carrot, Activity Hammer, swimming, hot pools, thermal, sliding, water slide, cabins, tiring, tidying

I enjoyed your lasagna, steak and cheese pies and your pasta. I remember when you told us about what country  you were from. I wish I had more of the food because it was so yummy. thank you again so much I would think everyone else would like you from the other schools would like your food too. Thank you Rusty Carrot.

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(Paragraph 3): In this paragraph you ask the person some questions about their camp experience. These should be questions that you actually want an answer to (at least 30 words).

Key words: who what why where how

Where is the Rusty Carrot company from? Why did you work for Rusty Carrot? How do you get so much food? What is your favorite food? Who is your boss.

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(Paragraph 4): This is the concluding paragraph where you thank the person again for taking part, sum up your feelings about camp this year and end with a positive comment about the person (at least 30 words).

Key words:

Thank you again for giving us food for camp, I really like you Rusty Carrot because you are nice and respectful. So thank you again Rusty Carrot, your food was great!

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Yours sincerely

Saxon    

When you have finished writing your letter:

1. Read it out loud to yourself.

- Does it make sense?

- Do I need to add or change anything?

2. Have a buddy reading conference.

- Use the sheet in your writing book.

3. Make any changes you need to.

- Use tools and fix spelling.

4. Add some pictures from above.

- Or ask Mr M if he has some others you could use.

5. Mark your recount using the rubric below.

6. Get a buddy to mark your recount using the rubric.

7. Ask Mr M to mark your recount.

8. Post your recount on your learning blog.

9. Comment on the recounts on other blogs.

- Remember to use the shared blog comment sheet

Marking My CAMP LETTER
		What I need to do	Me / 5	Buddy / 5	Mr M / 5
1. PARAGRAPHS		Each paragraph is about ONE main idea.	4	5	5
2. SENTENCE STARTERS		Sentences begin with different words.	5	4	3
3. VOCABULARY		The right words (key vocab) have been used to add detail and say exactly what you mean, and make sense.	5	5	3
4. LANGUAGE		Writing makes sense. My writing flows smoothly.	4	4	4
5. PUNCTUATION		Capitals are used when needed. Full stops are used at the end of sentences. EXTRA: Commas, question marks, speech marks and exclamation marks used in the right places ( . , ! ? " ").	5	4	3
6. HOW DID I DO?		Total points (of 25 points)	23	22	18
Me: Star and a wish	Star:it is nice and long Wish:make it simple
Buddy: Star and a wish	Star: I like how you thought of the other schools and people Wish:remember to use capital letters
Mr M: Star and a wish	Star: I know that Rusty Carrot will enjoy this letter, Saxon, because you are saying such positive things about their food. You have also shown that you are thinking and using interesting detail and ideas in your letter. Wish: Start your sentences with a wider range of words. Make sure that proper nouns (names, places, countries) have a capital letter. Also try to use different types of punctuation.